The part of the proposal that I thought was a waste of time.
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https://youtu.be/VG-nOzTgW2M
1) It's a waste of time to have prototypes but no images or videos.
(2) Overuse of bold and text color is a waste of time.
(iii) No priorities are attached, which is a waste of time.
4) "oo is great! So xx is great too!" is a waste!
(5) It would be a waste if some of the use cases are unclear.
(6) It's a waste of time to have no sample code even though it's a proposal for a system system.
(vii) It's a waste of a proposal that emphasizes low prices, but without concrete figures.
(8) I haven't looked into similar services and it's a waste of time.
(ix) "How do you make it happen?" part is abstract and a waste of time.
[Adoption is, frankly, luck.
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